9/29 R E P Revise, Edit, Publish

Peer review.

Edit to perfection and to following every part of the directions on the blue submission form.

Publish tomorrow!

What is required for our letter?

We know how to:
Write a headline.
Write key words.
Write a lead statement.

Write a persuasive essay that starts with your lead statement and good questions. Explains in at least two paragraphs what your concerns are, including your solution. Ends with a question or request for the next president to complete your suggestions.

The Fine Print




Read your comments. Finalize your work. Use the checklist. Peer review. Enjoy your learning.

Letters to the President: Writing to the Future Project Checklist

Requirements

For Google Docs

__ Did I write only in the white areas?

__ Did I write a catchy headline?

__ Did I choose up to three keywords, separated by commas, for your piece to help readers find your piece by topic.

__ Did I write a strong verb lead-- no more than 75 words to summarize your main point and catch your readers' interest?

__ Did I write my pseudonym? (Code Name)

__ Did I complete my letter to the president in the correct area-- begin with the first sentence of the body of the letter & continue to the end?

__ Did I double space BETWEEN paragraphs?

For Wiki

__ Did I write my headline as title?

__ Did I start essay with my strong verb lead?

__ Did I include questions at the beginning?

__ Did I complete my letter to the president?

__ Did I comment positively on someone else’s letter?


Content of Letter

__ Does my letter start with a lead statement?

__ Does my letter beginning also include questions?

__ Does my letter explain my concerns?

__ Does my letter explain my concerns with __ examples, __ statistics, __ experts, or __ anecdote?

__ Does my letter explain my solution for the president?

__ Does my letter end with a question to ask the president to implement (do) my solution?

__ Are the ideas written in my own words?

__ Did I include sources for my statistics or quotes?

__ Did I include the name of article in my letter? or

__ Did I include a footnote at the end of the letter?

Style of Letter

__ Did I use strong verbs?

__ Did I use different lengths of sentences?

__ Did I start my sentences in different ways?

__ Did I elaborate with details, examples, evidence, experiences, explanations?

__ Did I use persuasive strategies (bandwagon, experts, anecdotes, rhetorical questions, statistics)?

__ Did I have an introduction? (lead statement; questions)

__ Did I have a conclusion? (ask the president to implement my solution)

Edit of letter

__ Did I read my letter over WORD BY WORD to make sure I did not miss any words or use the wrong words?

__ Did I read my letter over again WORD BY WORD to check the spelling of every word?

__ Did I read my letter over again to make sure I found the ends of sentences and did not write run-on sentences?

__ Did I use the correct punctuation?

__ Did I use correct capitalization?

__ Did I write in paragraphs?