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Showing posts with label blog. Show all posts

12/7/09 - 01/04/10

Focus:
Prewriting Ideas -- gathering, writing, organizing, revising for draft
Drafting and Revising-- ARMS: Add, Remove, Move, Substitute
Organize: Narrative
Goal: Story Workshop


Information





12/7 eracism final debate


12/8 Reflection on eracism


12/9 Review
Write and share beginnings: What is your lead?


Characterization:
Description by Narrator, Other characters
Personality by what the character says, thinks, does
Personality by how character interacts with other characters
Personality by what other characters say


Plot Structure: Use the plot pyramid to understand your story: What’s missing? needs improvement? What is your message and theme?


Revision: Figurative Language, Nifty Nouns, Vivid Verbs


Partner Work/Share --Stars and Wishes sharing


12/10 Library --- Endings and Titles


12/11 Partner Work/Share Edit


12/14  12/15 Final edits and revisions;Publish; Create Holiday cards and snowflakes


12/15 
12/17 Dress Rehearsal


12/18 Holiday Party

1/4/09


Finish Stories

1/5/09


Information Reading -- Blogs: TweenTribune and Weekly Reader WORD

What topics did you find? Find one of interest.
Write a gist statement. Find a quote you like:
Copy quote
Explain why the quote is important to the writer
Explain why you agree or disagree (provide evidence and Be Kind -- talk about the idea)
Thank the writer for his/her ideas


Continue reading for information. Find own topic by reading about current events: Helping Hounds; Hard Work Famous; Arctic Animals; Marsupials; Swamps; Snowflakes; Learn email etiquette





May 12 - May 18

Focus
Writing Process Expectations for criteria
Review/complete 6 Trait work
Lessons: Thesis/Main ideas in text and images; documentation is prewriting

Capture: Set daily goals and reflect
Strength: Practice daily lesson skill
Interact: with words/peers/teacher
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/CSI-Schedule

Resources:
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfjbbnsb_9247nvzpdj
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Thesis-Statement
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Revision-Tips-2
http://photographylessons-byerika.blogspot.com/
http://youthvoices.net/assign/photo-essays/9959
http://digital-photography-school.com/5-photo-essay-tips
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/iSearch
https://whatelse.pbworks.com/Photo-Essay-Template

http://whatelse.pbworks.com/WR8-Requirements

http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Wednesday-Writing-Reflections


Writing Process Expectations for criteria
Review/complete 6 Trait work
Diigo Youth Voices MOTT Work


Daily--
Continue in Workshop:
Photo Editing, iSearch, Youth Voices
Navigation
Graduation: Symbol Art (Art, Essay, Poem), Symbol, Personal Flag Essay

Tuesday 5/12
Photo-Essay -- Ideas (JS, SW, READ),Questions/Thesis -- gather info
Graduation -- Motto vote, Symbol development

Wednesday 5/13 WASL Wednesday -- Reflections
Photo-Essay -- Question/Thesis-- draft -- use template
Graduation -- Symbol Art (Art, Essay, Poem), Symbol, Personal Flag Essay


Thursday 5/14 Owhi Lake Day

Friday 5/15
Thank you letters
Photo-Essay -- Question/Thesis-- draft -- use template
Graduation -- Symbol Art (Art, Essay, Poem), Symbol, Personal Flag Essay

Monday 5/18
Photo-Essay -- Question/Thesis-- draft -- use template
Graduation -- Symbol Art (Art, Essay, Poem), Symbol, Personal Flag Essay


Continue:

Note: Your Youth Voices assignments are based on your iSearch and Photo Essay learning: prewriting, drafting, revising, publishing.

1. Write about your photography learning and iSearch/Photo Essay on your YV Drafts page. The posts should specifically reference some of the photo elements you want to practice and the photo essay information your photos will emphasize. Some of your info may be on your iSearch page -- Copy and paste to your Youth Voices or Essay Template page. Then, copy and paste as posts on Youth Voices --about what you're learning about photo editing using the elements of design and about what you are learning about your thesis for your photo essay. Make sure you tag your posts with the keywords
"photo design"
“photo essay” Google Docs YV 1.3

2. Link to the online images of our school if your computer does not have them on the hard drive. Download the one you want. Import to and edit from iPhoto. In iPhoto export the "current" photo to the Desktop W8 student folder. Upload your picture to your YV draft page. Explain what you did, including the photo elements you used. Copy and paste the text as a post in a discussion on your Youth Voices and tag it with “Near Our School.” Include your explanation of the picture (how it relates to life in our community) and your explanation of how and why you completed the edit (include your photo elements). Upload your picture. (Note: this can be part of your work in paragraph one). Google Docs YV 2.4

3. Write an Earthday post at Youth Voices based on our reading and discussions in reading class. (This should be done.) Google Docs YV 1.2

4, 5, 6, 7, 8 are part of Google Docs YV 3.1 3.2 3.3 3.4 3.5 and 5.1 5.2 5.3 5.4 5.5 (See number 8) and 4.1 4.2 4.3 4.4 4.5 (Number 7):

4. Add photography notes to iSearch page.

5. Add research/photos for photo-essay to iSearch page (prewriting).

https://whatelse.pbworks.com/W8-Photo-Essay-Tips

Diigo/notes/research/draft/revise

6. When iSearch photos and research notes are taken and recorded on your iSearch page, begin your photo-essay planning.

https://whatelse.pbworks.com/Photo-Essay-Template

7. Read and write about other Youth Voices posts to complete Google Docs YV 4.1 4.2 4.3 4.4 4.5 This is also be part of your research.

8. Read and write other texts that are similar to your research. This will add to your information (Google Docs YV 5.1 5.2 5.3 5.4 5.5)

9. Write a quote on your YV page: what does it mean to you and why is it important to you. Copy/paste to Youth Voices. Google Docs YV 2.1 or 1.1 depending on length.


Review Info:

Lessons and Photo Essay: Photography; Thesis/Main ideas in text and images; documentation is prewriting (iSearch); Editing
Teacher conferences for progress/feedback -- track on CSI sheet --- Find photos; Draft -- use template

Workshop: Students work on own projects (MOTT/iSearch/YV and photography) with review lessons and personalized feedback

Focus, Thesis, Draw Conclusions about thesis with details

Diigo/notes/research/draft/revise
Photography Assignment -- iSearch

Navigation -- Which lessons have you completed?

Graduation -- What requirements and writing have you completed?



EALRS

EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing. Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies
1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan. b. Drafts according to audience, purpose, and time.
d. Assesses draft and/or feedback,
1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas. Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — looking for variety of sentence structure and length; second reading — checking for clarity and specific word choice; third reading — checking for layers of elaboration). f. Evaluates and justifies the choice to use feedback in revisions (e.g., “I don’t want to change this because …”).
3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.
3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure.
2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively .2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing


February 18 - March 2

Focus
Third Quarter Requirements (Reading/Writing for 8)
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Requirements
Writing Process Expectations for criteria
Review/complete 6 Trait work
Voice Thread: Making Changes -- http://voicethread.com/share/72003/

Wednesday 2/18
C = Genre
S = Thesis Statement Review YV
I = Youth Voices
Making Comments; Getting to Know the site
http://youthvoices.net/assign/comments/8165
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/W8-Blog-Writing

Thursday 2/19
Library?
C = Genre
S = Youth Voices Assignments-- personal connections
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=d4zfw7d_6f82rsngh
I = Youth Voices
MIT Project
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/W8-MIT-Vocabulary-Contest

Friday 2/20
C = Genre
S = Google Reader-- research question
I = Youth Voices
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Blog-Qs
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Respond-to-Quote
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=d4zfw7d_6f82rsngh
http://youthvoices.net/node/7158

Monday 2/23
Sub:
Grammar: Punctuation of sentences; dialogue

Tuesday 2/24
C = Genre
S = Connections and--- current events
I = Youth Voices

Wednesday 2/25
S= youth voices --evaluation so far
S = Connections and--- current events with Diigo
draft blogs on wiki

Thursday 2/26
Library -- MOTT
S = Connections and--- current events with Diigo
draft blogs on wiki

Friday 2/27 and Monday 3/2
S = Connections and--- current events with Diigo
MOTT Work

3/2 and
YOUTH Voices --- draft blogs on wiki
evaluate with six traits of writing; peer review




EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing. Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies
1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan. b. Drafts according to audience, purpose, and time.
d. Assesses draft and/or feedback,
1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas. Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — looking for variety of sentence structure and length; second reading — checking for clarity and specific word choice; third reading — checking for layers of elaboration). f. Evaluates and justifies the choice to use feedback in revisions (e.g., “I don’t want to change this because …”).
3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.
3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure.
2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively .2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.


February 10 - February 18, 2009

Focus

Eagle Festival Essay/Poetry
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Eagle-Contest

Voice Thread: Making Changes
http://voicethread.com/share/72003/

Figurative language
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Figurative-Language

MOTT on Eagles Write
http://nespelem.org/whatelse/

Editor Progress

Third Quarter Requirements (Reading/Writing for 8)
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Requirements

Thesis Statements
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Thesis-Statement


Lesson Focus


The student will be able to follow the writing process using the six traits of powerful writing and peer conferences to prewrite, draft, and compose writing pieces in different genre.


Monday 2/9 Tuesday 2/10
Finalize story/essay/poems and print
Found Poetry from our prose and prewriting
Review figurative language possibilities
Revise, share, finalize, print.

Wednesday 2/11
C = Genre
S = Youth Voices Expectations and How To http://youthvoices.net/
I = Youth Voices

Thursday 2/12
Library
Youth Voices

Friday 2/13
Valentines Party PM - last period

Monday President’s Day
Tuesday Waiver Day; teacher learning

Wednesday 2/18
C = Genre
S = Thesis Statement Review YV
I = Youth Voices


EALR

1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing. Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies

1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan. b. Drafts according to audience, purpose, and time.
d. Assesses draft and/or feedback

1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).

1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas. Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — looking for variety of sentence structure and length; second reading — checking for clarity and specific word choice; third reading — checking for layers of elaboration). f. Evaluates and justifies the choice to use feedback in revisions (e.g., “I don’t want to change this because …”).

3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.

3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure.

2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively .

2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.

November 17-December 8

Power Writing
Writing Notebooks
Blogs


MOTT: Clear, careful, synthesized writing with graphics explaining topic of choice.
Talking Circle


Monday, November 17
MOTT paper due.
Power Write -- 1 minute times -- three times
Read blogs and discuss--Blog Intro 2 --- Grow a Blog prewriting/google docs
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Blog-Reads
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Blog-Permission
Read requirements and agreements; planning template
Notebooks Lesson N5: Pictures Sensory Images -- Can you write to describe sights, sounds, smells, tastes, touch?

Tuesday, 11/18
Navigation 101 Into: http://www.navigationsre.htm
Grammar: Blue Write Source -- p. 422; Share the right feeling with vivid verbs
Notebooks: N7 Writing from the heart
Blog Plans prewrite -- what is your plan? -- google docs
Read requirements and agreements; planning template

Wednesday, 11/19
Substitute Teacher
Power Writing-- 2 minute times
Grammar: Blue Write Source -- p. 420 Subject Verb Agreement; Do practice.
Notebooks: N6 Fierce Wonderings

Thursday: 11/20
Library
Evaluation Evidence -- think about it while you plan your blog.

Friday: 11/21
Entry: Find ten more spelling words from Write Source 2000, page 412+

Make up Work: Essay --
Think:
We worked in class for two weeks on the essay. We worked on research before we started writing, used graphic organizers, discussed as a class and with partners, and asked the teacher questions (who also conferred with you to guide you in the process of a comparative essay). Progress reports have been provided, and another report notified you on Monday that your essay was missing. Think: You had class time, jump start, library, noon recess, and your own homework time to complete the essay. This twenty-minute period is a gift to you.

Other students: Write Source Convention Practice.

Blog Etiquette Review; reading and comment practice (as class)
Notebooks: authority list; sensory images; blog ideas? -- prep for Monday

Teacher conferences for planning, notebooks
Assessment: ideas/verbs/sensory images
Share plans.

Monday, 11/24
Entry: Power Write--2 minutes (3 times)
MOTT writing -- paper due Monday, 12/1 (30 minutes)
Poetry Reading -- Found Lines = Found Poems
  • Read the poems
  • Choose 15 words you like
  • Copy them down on strips of paper
  • Practice reading
  • Circle read all "Found Lines" as a "Found Poem"
If time: Notebook -- try your own poem writing.

Tuesday, 11/25
Nespelem at Republic
Entry Notebooks: Which will you try today: Your own; Ideas; Senses; Pictures; World Wonders; Your Heart?
Find 15 words, "Found Lines" from your notebook; copy; practice.
Share our own "Found Poems."
MOTT work.

Wednesday, 11/26
MOTT, Blog, Found Poems from other's blogs.

Monday, 12/1
Power Write -- 1 minute (three times) Check spelling.
Writing Pattern--Blog idea --Respond to Quote--Blue Write Source p. 274
Homework: Respond to Quote (Quote, Quote + my experience; Quote + my meaning) Due Friday
Notebook: N8 -- Adding conversations
Intro to Sub activities and Checklist sheets.
  • Power writing
  • Grammar
  • Notebook

12/2, 3, 4: Sub Plans


Friday, December 5
Power Write
Grammar: Review Tues-Thurs
Notebooks: Check in for: Volume, Frequency, Writing Tips
Create Table of Contents
Share

If time--Blog: Blog ideas to share -- quotes or other; Blog Space -- how to get there and sign in
Share

Monday, December 8
Power Write
Lesson on ideas and strong verbs:
IDEAs and Word Choice (Strong Verbs)
Notebook: Are you adding details and strong verbs to your writing?



EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process.
1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan. b. Drafts according to audience, purpose, and time.
d. Assesses draft and/or feedback, decides if multiple drafts are necessary, and explains decision.
1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).
1.6.1 Applies understanding of the recursive nature of writing process.
Revises at any stage of process.
Edits as needed at any stage.

1.6.2 Uses collaborative skills in adapting writing process.

1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas. d. Seeks and considers feedback from a variety of sources (e.g., adults, peers, community members, response groups). e. Records feedback using writing group procedure (e.g., partner reads writer’s work aloud, and writer notes possible revision). f. Evaluates and justifies the choice to use feedback in revisions (e.g., “I don’t want to change this because …”). g. Revises typographic devices (e.g., bullets, numbered lists) to clarify text and to meet requirements of technical writing forms (e.g., lab reports, graphs).

3.2.1 Applies understanding that different audiences and purposes affect writer’s voice. Writes with a clearly defined voice appropriate to audience.

November 12 - November 17

Power Writing
Writing Notebooks
Blogs
Genre

MOTT: Clear, careful, synthesized writing with graphics explaining topic of choice.
Talking Circle


Monday, November 10: Inservice -- no school
Tuesday, November 11: Veteran’s Day


Wednesday, November 12

Entry: Authority List for Writing -- make a list of writing topics

Talking Circle with Miss Covington

Due: comparative essays Due 11/17: MOTT paper


Thursday, November 13
Library
MOTT Paper and presentation


Friday, November 14

Evaluation Questions
Blog Intro: What are they --- read blogs, discuss what they are and how they apply.
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Blog-Permission
MOTT conferences and checklist
Our Journals !


Monday, November 17
Entry: Power Write
N-4 Personalize notebooks

Blog Intro 2 --- Grow a Blog prewriting/google docs

Tuesday, 11/18
Entry: Spelling -- choose 5 words
Navigation 101 Into: http://www.navigationsre.htm

Finish: Blog Intro 2 --- Grow a Blog prewriting/google docs


Wednesday, 11/19
How to Practice Spelling
Notebook: N5- Sensory and Pictorial Ideas
Blog prewriting -- google docs
If time:
Genre choices -- what is required? which do we learn first?
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Genre-Expectations

Thursday: 11/20
Library
Evaluation Evidence

Friday: 11/21
Entry: Power Write
Lesson: IDEAs and Word Choice (Strong Verbs)
Blog Plans and Action steps

Monday, 11/24
Entry: Find ten more spelling words for your personal spelling list.
Notebook N6: World Wonders
Blog Plans and Action Steps
MOTT

Tuesday, 11/25
Entry: November Art
Blog work and MOTT work
Teacher conference on writing traits

Wednesday, 11/26
Art, MOTT, Blog

Monday, 12/1
Entry: Power Write
Notebook: N7 From the Heart
Blog Writing or Notebook writing
Intro to sub activities

12/2, 3, 4: Sub Plans



EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process.
1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan. b. Drafts according to audience, purpose, and time.
d. Assesses draft and/or feedback, decides if multiple drafts are necessary, and explains decision.
1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).
1.6.1 Applies understanding of the recursive nature of writing process.
Revises at any stage of process.
Edits as needed at any stage.

1.6.2 Uses collaborative skills in adapting writing process.

1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas. d. Seeks and considers feedback from a variety of sources (e.g., adults, peers, community members, response groups). e. Records feedback using writing group procedure (e.g., partner reads writer’s work aloud, and writer notes possible revision). f. Evaluates and justifies the choice to use feedback in revisions (e.g., “I don’t want to change this because …”). g. Revises typographic devices (e.g., bullets, numbered lists) to clarify text and to meet requirements of technical writing forms (e.g., lab reports, graphs).

3.2.1 Applies understanding that different audiences and purposes affect writer’s voice. Writes with a clearly defined voice appropriate to audience.