Showing posts with label resolution. Show all posts
Showing posts with label resolution. Show all posts

01/19/10 - 01/26/10

Focus:
Prewriting Ideas -- gathering, writing, organizing, revising for draft
Drafting and Revising-- ARMS: Add, Remove, Move, Substitute
Organize: Narrative
Goal: Story Workshop




Information




Characterization:
Description by Narrator, Other characters
Personality by what the character says, thinks, does
Personality by how character interacts with other characters
Personality by what other characters say




Plot Structure: Use the plot pyramid to understand your story: What’s missing? needs improvement? What is your message and theme?




Revision: Figurative Language, Nifty Nouns, Vivid Verbs




Partner Work/Share --Stars and Wishes sharing






Finish Stories





Information Reading -- Blogs: TweenTribune and Weekly Reader WORD


What topics did you find? Find one of interest.
Write a gist statement. Find a quote you like:
Copy quote
Explain why the quote is important to the writer
Explain why you agree or disagree (provide evidence and Be Kind -- talk about the idea)
Thank the writer for his/her ideas




Continue reading for information. Find own topic by reading about current events: Helping Hounds; Hard Work Famous; Arctic Animals; Marsupials; Swamps; Snowflakes; Learn email etiquette





1/19  Martin Luther King, Jr Day On reflections; 
Character Sketch--Poynter; WS2000, p. 123
Essay Drafts -- review essay format


If no essay: Power Write-- History or Science Book -- find two interesting people -- notes/paragraph -- share


1/20 Essay Drafts -- review essay format
Tween Tribune comment as class;
Current News with Tween Tribune; Essays


1/21 Essay revisions: ARMS
If no essay:
Awards Project: comparative and persuasive essays


1/22 Final Draft


1/26 Stars and Wishes


Current Projects:
OVLC History Project (essay and character sketch)
Internet Safety -- a How To for grades 5 6 7 
Responds to Quotes (Tween Tribune)
Stories (fiction)
Resolutions/MLK



EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process.

Component 1.2: Produces draft(s). W

Component 1.3: Revises to improve text. W

Component 1.4: Edits text. W

Component 3.3: Knows and applies appropriate grade level writing conventions. W

3.2.2 Analyzes and selects language appropriate for specific audiences and purposes.

EALR 3: The student writes clearly and effectively.
Component 3.1: Develops ideas and organizes writing. W





January 13th - January 20th, 2009




Focus


Word Choice Lesson : Eliminate Dead Verbs --http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Dead-Verbs
Focus: Writing Notebooks --
N12 Simple to Complex

Capture: Set daily goals and reflect
Strength: Practice daily lesson skill
Interact: with words/peers/teacher
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/CSI-Schedule

Making changes: resolutions and blogs
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Making-Changes
Editors: Create, design, select, upkeep Coyote Talks
GENRE: http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Genre-Expectations





Tuesday 1/13

Resolution: Changes We Want
Wiki Ideas; Read-Write Blog
Genre Discussion; Editor Idea;
Group Discuss with plan to turn in

Possibilities for G8: Memory Book
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Memory-Book-Project

Wednesday 1/14
Resolution: Changes We Are 4 Day
Resolution: Changes We Are for MLK: MLK Reading
Poems: How to Evaluate? What criteria? Eagle Festival -- Contest?

Thursday 1/15
Library
MOTT Due

Friday 1/16
Resolution: Changes We Are 4 Day and More

Essay/Poems 2 groups develop criteria

Monday 1/19 MLK Day
Tuesday 1/20 Inauguration Day
Service Reflection

Inauguration Activities




EALR

1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing. Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies
1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan. b. Drafts according to audience, purpose, and time.
d. Assesses draft and/or feedback,
1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas. Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — looking for variety of sentence structure and length; second reading — checking for clarity and specific word choice; third reading — checking for layers of elaboration). f. Evaluates and justifies the choice to use feedback in revisions (e.g., “I don’t want to change this because …”).
3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.
3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure.
2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively .2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.