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08/31/09-09/08/09



Focus:


Week Focus:
Why am I here? (contract); procedures;
Prewriting Ideas -- gathering, writing, organizing, revising for draft


Cat and Fish by J. Grant

Links:
Welcome Back
Start Page: Ms. Edwards
Assignments and Links
http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Team-Roles-Intro
Why are we here Google Doc
Math Data Survey




Bar-b-cue 8/31

Meet the families--Introduce the year
Focus--Who am I--Who are you
What should I know about your student?
Writing Class Technology
Reading Strategies, homework supplies; Writing Components (Traits and Process), strategies, supplies

Tues 9/1

Paper: 5 things I like to do
It’s Utter Panda-monium Around Here! How do we prevent pandemonium?
Welcome Prezi and Glogster info.
(T-Chart) Procedures -Enter room--Supplies--Help
Cat and Fish
Prompt:
How can we meet in the middle of our worlds?
http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Team-Roles-Intro

Edit: Captials, Punctuation, Spelling

WED 9/2

CSI: Capture, Strengthen Interact
C: Paper: 5 things I don't like to do; meet in the middle (yesterday)
S: How do you write to a topic? How did you get your ideas? How did you write them down?
I: Poster “I hear yes’s better than no’s.”
Lead to review of procedures (lesson time, work time)
Prompt:
Why am I here? Independent, partner, group, class
Partner, Group at Google Docs: http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0AQsuI822sR10ZGZqYmJuc2JfMTA0ZDRubjd6Z3E&hl=en

Check:
Ideas? Strategy? Organized? Proofread?
Survey: http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Survey-AS

Thurs 9/3

Library: Book Fair
C: Meet in the middle, Yes's, Why here?*
Survey-AS ---http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Survey-AS

Finish Test
Poster: Cat in a fishbowl; fish outside looking in

Fri 9/4

C: Paper: What facts do you know from our survey? How do you know?

Poster: “Some days it doesn’t pay to get out of bed.”
Discuss how to share feelings; how to put problems aside and focus at school.
Preparation for President Obama’s speech and Constitution reading/writing

Monday Labor Day
Tuesday 9/8
Complete Constitution/Obama discussion
http://nespelemeagles.pbworks.com/President-Speaks-to-Kids President Obama

C: Paper: What facts do you know from our survey? How do you know?
Add to blog--- http://writemath4u.blogspot.com/

http://writemath4u.blogspot.com/2009/09/find-facts-b.html

Goal: Prewrite in web, list, or free-write, then re-read and number to organize your ideas before drafting.

S: Review Why am I Here? Doc
Write to a topic-- did you --
Prewrite 1: List, web, freewrite, number?
Prewrite 2: Add details, names (nouns/adjectives), active verbs; number to organize
Ideas? Strategies? Organized? Revise? Strategies? Proofread?





EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process.

Component 1.2: Produces draft(s). W

Component 1.3: Revises to improve text. W

Component 1.4: Edits text. W

Component 3.3: Knows and applies appropriate grade level writing conventions. W

3.2.2 Analyzes and selects language appropriate for specific audiences and purposes.


EALR 3: The student writes clearly and effectively.
Component 3.1: Develops ideas and organizes writing. W




Assessment

9/8 Goal: Can you write to a topic with clear and organized ideas? What strategies do you use? Where's your evidence of your strategies (process) and your writing (product)?

Products

Have you written:
5 things I like to do
5 things I don't like to do
1 Favorite sport or hobby; 1 Thing good at in that sport or hobby; 1 thing to get better at in that sport or hobby

How can we meet in the middle of our worlds?


Why am I here?
What do I (we) need to do to make it happen in a way that is positive, safe, and fun?


Process


Prewrite 1: List, web, freewrite, -- number ideas in order-- all on topic
Prewrite 2-- revise ideas: Add details, names (nouns/adjectives), active verbs; number to organize -- all on topic

I: Did you follow “write to a topic” procedure?
Ideas? Strategies? Organized? Strategies? Revise? Strategies? Proofread?

What did you learn?
What do you need to learn (goal)
What steps do you need to take to learn this? (plan)


February 2 to February 9

Focus

Eagle Festival Essay/Poetry
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Eagle-Contest

Figurative language
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Figurative-Language

MOTT on Eagles Write
http://nespelem.org/whatelse/

Editor Progress

Third Quarter Requirements (Reading/Writing for 8)
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Requirements


Lesson Focus


The student will be able to follow the writing process using the six traits of powerful writing and peer conferences to prewrite, draft, and compose an essay and a poem on a topic related to the Balde Eagle Festival.

Our Lesson Progress is listed at:
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Eagle-Contest

Focus
Writing Process Expectations for criteria
Review/complete 6 Trait work
Genre Discussion; Editor Idea;
Poems: How to Evaluate? What criteria? Eagle Festival -- Contest?

Eagle Contest
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Eagle-Contest

Voice Thread: Making Changes
http://voicethread.com/share/72003/

Figurative Language

Log of Work -- steps in unit on page 2 -- follow EALR expectations at right.



Monday 2/2
WASL Test/Review
MOTT

Tuesday 2/3 Wednesday 2/4


https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Eagle-Contest

http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/W5678-Shee-Camping-Trip What details and action are in YOUR draft?
Review strategies: zoom, snapshot, 5Ws, gists, looks/sounds/acts
Code your organization.
Draft, Share, Draft on wiki

Review figurative language
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Figurative-Language


Thursday 2/
5 NEAP TEST

Friday 2/6

Poetry for contest: Found/Pattern
http://room30space.blogspot.com/2008/10/poetry-corner.html
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Eagle-Contest#ProcessFoundPoem

Discuss poem possibilities
Draft, Share, Draft on wiki

Monday 2/9

Finalize story/essay/poems and print
Review figurative language possibilities
Revise, share, finalize, print.



EALR

1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing. Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies

1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan. b. Drafts according to audience, purpose, and time.
d. Assesses draft and/or feedback

1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).

1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas. Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — looking for variety of sentence structure and length; second reading — checking for clarity and specific word choice; third reading — checking for layers of elaboration). f. Evaluates and justifies the choice to use feedback in revisions (e.g., “I don’t want to change this because …”).

3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.

3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure.

2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively .

2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.

Week of September 30 - October 6

Monday Sep 29
Finalize Publication of Letter
Final revise and review and publish of document online (use checklist)

Tuesday Sep 30

W8: Reflections on Learning
What did you learn about:
audience
purpose

leads
key words
persuasive strategies
elaboration
prewriting
drafting
revising
editing
peer review
self-review
note-taking
citations
plagiarism

Wednesday Oct 1 Parent Student Teacher Conferences

Thursday Oct 2
Library.
Student compacts.
Discuss and revise letters, if needed.

Friday Oct 3
Who Are You: Forming Collaborative Teams
Identifying Commonalities in the book’s descriptions
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Who-Are-You

Form Teams; read book. Create a list of your own descriptions and a sketch of yourself.
What are you made of?
Identifying Commonalities Part 1
I am made of _______.
Text of facts about yourself.
Did you know?
Sketch

Mon Oct 6
Entry: Read over and revise your self-portrait:

Who Are You:
Identifying Commonalities Part 1 Identifying Commonalities in the book’s descriptions
I am made of ________.
Text about yourself (hobbies, facts, factoids)
Did you know?
Sketch (with graphics related to your written text).

Share.
Part 2 --- identify commonalities in your team following the pattern in the book
Part 3 -- publication and art work