Showing posts with label organization. Show all posts
Showing posts with label organization. Show all posts

03/15/10 - 03/22/10

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Focus:
Prewriting Ideas -- gathering, writing, organizing, revising for draft
Drafting and Revising-- ARMS: Add, Remove, Move, Substitute
Organize: Biography; Compare/Contrast
Goal: Biographical Memorial Person Award

Tween Tribune
Essay Variety: Expository, Compare/contrast, Persuasive




Document daily: CSI

Document Weekly: Writing Log on Writing Process and Traits


Each Essay: Self Evaluate (See also Awards information)

3/15 Owhi Work Project: Edit practice, Evaluate for organization and elaboration; view entries for Owhi contest
3/16 Owhi Project: Evaluate for word choice; review organization and elaboration; student revisions with rubric
3/17 Continue revisions
3/18 Share revisions; Work on research essay again
3/19 Substitute
3/22 Essay research project

Week Project:
Write with style and word choice (strong verbs; specific nouns)
Organize for best information and elaboration.
Plan design for presentation.

Topic: Owhi Lake
Goal 1: Write organized and elaborated paragraphs with style and word choice. Edit the paragraphs.

Goal 2: Create a broster/T-shirt design using elements of design and layout and reflecting the paragraphs about Owhi Lake.


Tasks:
Continue lists of specific nouns and vivid verbs about Owhi Lake.
Discuss model draft of Owhi Lake paragraphs.
Use the lists to draft at least two paragraphs about Owhi Lake:
* Decide organization style
* Determine approrpiate elaboration
* Write with nifty nouns and vivid verbs
* Edit
* Revise paragraphs




Current Projects:
Interview Project (essay and character sketch)
Awards Project: comparative and persuasive essays
Responds to Quotes (Tween Tribune)
Directions
Essay Outline: 
 Compare/Contrast Essay 
Award Nomination Essay


EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process.

Component 1.2: Produces draft(s). W

Component 1.3: Revises to improve text. W

Component 1.4: Edits text. W

Component 3.3: Knows and applies appropriate grade level writing conventions. W

3.2.2 Analyzes and selects language appropriate for specific audiences and purposes.

EALR 3: The student writes clearly and effectively.
Component 3.1: Develops ideas and organizes writing. W
3.2.1 Applies understanding that different audiences and purposes affect writer’s voice. Writes from more than one point of view or perspective  (third person for mathematical communication)
3.2.2 Analyzes and selects language appropriate for specific audiences and purposes. Selects and uses specialized vocabulary relevant to a specific content area (e.g., meteorologist, climatology).

April 6 - April 13

Focus and Resources
Third Quarter Requirements (Reading/Writing for 8)
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Requirements
MOTT Work


http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Thesis-Statement
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Revision-Tips-2

Photo Essay
http://photographylessons-byerika.blogspot.com/
http://voicethread.com/share/106061/
http://youthvoices.net/assign/photo-essays/9959
http://digital-photography-school.com/5-photo-essay-tips
http://www.viiphoto.com/showstory.php?nID=815
http://www.viiphoto.com/showstory.php?nID=814
http://www.jamesnachtwey.com/
http://www.joachimladefoged.com/#/multimedia/1/81/

Photo Essay Notes and Info


http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/iSearch


Writing Process Expectations for criteria
Review/complete 6 Trait work
revision organizer
iSearch

Lessons: Thesis/Main ideas in text and images; documentation is prewriting---

Blog

W8 Photography Assignments

Flickr

W8 iSearch Reflection

W8 iSearch Shee (Sample)

Using Diigo

Youth Voices


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4/6 - 4/13

Continue in Workshop using above resources as references and lessons as needed:

Photo Comments (4), iSearch, Youth Voices
http://youthvoices.net/assign/photo-essays/9959
http://digital-photography-school.com/5-photo-essay-tips
http://photographylessons-byerika.blogspot.com/
http://voicethread.com/share/106061/


Create some posts on
Youth Voices about what you're learning about photo essays. The posts should specifically reference some of the photo essays you thought were best. Make sure you tag your post with the keyword "photo essay"

Our first photo -essay: Around Our School
Lessons: Thesis/Main ideas in text and images; documentation is prewriting (iSearch)
Teacher conferences for progress/feedback -- track on CSI sheet

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Peer and Student Conferences

Writing: -- Explain:

Wiki writing--- Writing Process and Six Traits of Writing
Prewrite
Draft for ideas and word choice
Revise for ideas elaboration, word choice, sentence fluency, organization, voice.
Edit for grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc.

Publish

Diigo -- highlight, annotate, bookmark
Wiki -- Diigo notes turn in to drafts

iSearch Photo-Essay

Workshop: Students work on own projects (MOTT and photography) with review lessons and personalized feedback

Focus, Thesis, Draw Conclusions about thesis with details

I:
Diigo/notes/research/draft/revise
W8 Photography Assignments -- iSearch
Sample iSearch
Sample Photo Assignment


Photography:

What:,
What is it?
How do it?
What I will do

So What?
What I did
What I learned, including writing and photographic element reflection based on image

Now What?
What will I do next time?
What is the next element to learn?


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4/6 4/7
Comment on Erika's blog
Intro to Youth Voices Assignments
Photography Basics: CELL

4/8 Photography Elements -- Form
Youth Voices 1.1 1.2 1.3 to do.

4/9 Library

4/10
iSearch: Photo Elements; YV; More elements of photography

4/13
Take photos following elements of photography.
WASL info.





EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing. Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies
1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan. b. Drafts according to audience, purpose, and time.
d. Assesses draft and/or feedback,
1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas. Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — looking for variety of sentence structure and length; second reading — checking for clarity and specific word choice; third reading — checking for layers of elaboration). f. Evaluates and justifies the choice to use feedback in revisions (e.g., “I don’t want to change this because …”).
3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.
3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure.
2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively .2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.

March 23-April 6

Focus and Resources
Third Quarter Requirements (Reading/Writing for 8)
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Requirements
MOTT Work


http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Thesis-Statement
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Revision-Tips-2

Photo Essay
http://photographylessons-byerika.blogspot.com/
http://voicethread.com/share/106061/
http://youthvoices.net/assign/photo-essays/9959
http://digital-photography-school.com/5-photo-essay-tips
http://www.viiphoto.com/showstory.php?nID=815
http://www.viiphoto.com/showstory.php?nID=814
http://www.jamesnachtwey.com/
http://www.joachimladefoged.com/#/multimedia/1/81/

Photo Essay Notes and Info


http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/iSearch


Writing Process Expectations for criteria
Review/complete 6 Trait work
revision organizer
iSearch

Lessons: Thesis/Main ideas in text and images; documentation is prewriting---

Blog

W8 Photography Assignments

Flickr

W8 iSearch Reflection

W8 iSearch Shee (Sample)

Using Diigo

Youth Voices


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Monday 3/23 Tuesday 3/24 Wednesday 3/25 Friday 3/27 Monday 4/6

Continue in Workshop using above resources as references and lessons as needed:

Photo Comments (4), iSearch, Youth Voices
http://youthvoices.net/assign/photo-essays/9959
http://digital-photography-school.com/5-photo-essay-tips
http://photographylessons-byerika.blogspot.com/
http://voicethread.com/share/106061/


Create some posts on
Youth Voices about what you're learning about photo essays. The posts should specifically reference some of the photo essays you thought were best. Make sure you tag your post with the keyword "photo essay"

Our first photo -essay: Around Our School
Lessons: Thesis/Main ideas in text and images; documentation is prewriting (iSearch)
Teacher conferences for progress/feedback -- track on CSI sheet

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Prep for Conferences

Thursday 3/26: Conferences

Writing: -- Explain:

Wiki writing--- Writing Process and Six Traits of Writing
Prewrite
Draft for ideas and word choice
Revise for ideas elaboration, word choice, sentence fluency, organization, voice.
Edit for grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc.

Publish

Diigo -- highlight, annotate, bookmark
Wiki -- Diigo notes turn in to drafts

iSearch Photo-Essay

Workshop: Students work on own projects (MOTT and photography) with review lessons and personalized feedback

Focus, Thesis, Draw Conclusions about thesis with details

I:
Diigo/notes/research/draft/revise
W8 Photography Assignments -- iSearch
Sample iSearch
Sample Photo Assignment


Photography:

What:,
What is it?
How do it?
What I will do

So What?
What I did
What I learned, including writing and photographic element reflection based on image

Now What?
What will I do next time?
What is the next element to learn?


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EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing. Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies
1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan. b. Drafts according to audience, purpose, and time.
d. Assesses draft and/or feedback,
1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas. Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — looking for variety of sentence structure and length; second reading — checking for clarity and specific word choice; third reading — checking for layers of elaboration). f. Evaluates and justifies the choice to use feedback in revisions (e.g., “I don’t want to change this because …”).
3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.
3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure.
2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively .2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.


March 2 - March 9

Focus and Resources
Third Quarter Requirements (Reading/Writing for 8)
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Requirements
MOTT Work
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Thesis-Statement

http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Revision-Tips-2
http://photographylessons-byerika.blogspot.com/
Writing Process Expectations for criteria
Review/complete 6 Trait work
revision organizer

Using Diigo

Youth Voices


Friday 2/27
MOTT Work
YOUTH Voices
Thesis Statements


Monday 3/2
S: Speech practice: Share projects and thesis statements; timeline and progress
Feedback
Review thesis with six traits of writing (see folders; checklist)
I: Diigo/notes


Tuesday 3/3
S: Research: How to (small group)

Wednesday 3/4
S: Prewrite --- Draft review

Thursday 3/5
S: Draft -- revision organizer (names, verbs, action, imagery, etc.)

Friday 3/6
S: Draft --- revision organizer

Monday 3/2
S: Speech practice: Share projects and thesis statements; timeline and progress
Feedback
Review thesis with six traits of writing (see folders; checklist)
I: Diigo/notes/research/draft/revise





EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing. Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies
1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan. b. Drafts according to audience, purpose, and time.
d. Assesses draft and/or feedback,
1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas. Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — looking for variety of sentence structure and length; second reading — checking for clarity and specific word choice; third reading — checking for layers of elaboration). f. Evaluates and justifies the choice to use feedback in revisions (e.g., “I don’t want to change this because …”).
3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.
3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure.
2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively .2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.


February 2 to February 9

Focus

Eagle Festival Essay/Poetry
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Eagle-Contest

Figurative language
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Figurative-Language

MOTT on Eagles Write
http://nespelem.org/whatelse/

Editor Progress

Third Quarter Requirements (Reading/Writing for 8)
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Requirements


Lesson Focus


The student will be able to follow the writing process using the six traits of powerful writing and peer conferences to prewrite, draft, and compose an essay and a poem on a topic related to the Balde Eagle Festival.

Our Lesson Progress is listed at:
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Eagle-Contest

Focus
Writing Process Expectations for criteria
Review/complete 6 Trait work
Genre Discussion; Editor Idea;
Poems: How to Evaluate? What criteria? Eagle Festival -- Contest?

Eagle Contest
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Eagle-Contest

Voice Thread: Making Changes
http://voicethread.com/share/72003/

Figurative Language

Log of Work -- steps in unit on page 2 -- follow EALR expectations at right.



Monday 2/2
WASL Test/Review
MOTT

Tuesday 2/3 Wednesday 2/4


https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Eagle-Contest

http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/W5678-Shee-Camping-Trip What details and action are in YOUR draft?
Review strategies: zoom, snapshot, 5Ws, gists, looks/sounds/acts
Code your organization.
Draft, Share, Draft on wiki

Review figurative language
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Figurative-Language


Thursday 2/
5 NEAP TEST

Friday 2/6

Poetry for contest: Found/Pattern
http://room30space.blogspot.com/2008/10/poetry-corner.html
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Eagle-Contest#ProcessFoundPoem

Discuss poem possibilities
Draft, Share, Draft on wiki

Monday 2/9

Finalize story/essay/poems and print
Review figurative language possibilities
Revise, share, finalize, print.



EALR

1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing. Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies

1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan. b. Drafts according to audience, purpose, and time.
d. Assesses draft and/or feedback

1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).

1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas. Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — looking for variety of sentence structure and length; second reading — checking for clarity and specific word choice; third reading — checking for layers of elaboration). f. Evaluates and justifies the choice to use feedback in revisions (e.g., “I don’t want to change this because …”).

3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.

3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure.

2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively .

2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.