9/28/09-10/5/09

Week Focus:


Prewriting Ideas -- gathering, writing, organizing, revising for draft

Drafting and Revising-- ARMS: Add, Remove, Move, Substitute

Goal: Prewrite in web, list, or free-write, then re-read and number to organize your ideas before drafting; timeline; graphic organizer;

Goal: Fluency

Goal: poetry: Where I’m From

Figurative Language -- revision strategies (ARMS)

http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Where-Im-From





Tues 9/29

Notebook, Folder, CSI checklists -- Goals

Table of Contents

WASL review: persuasion and expository review

Into: Where I’m From -- timeline/snapshots/images prewriting/draft


Wed 9/30 and Thurs 10/1

Writing Pilot Test



Friday 10/2
Memorial for Yogi

Monday 10/5 10/6 10/7
C: Own goal
S:
Figurative Language Brosters -- Assignment 1



10/8
Topic Where I’m From

Prewrite Strategies: Freewrite, web, list, graphic organizer, timeline
Drafting Strategies: Organize notes from prewrite -- number/color/
start in middle

I: Prewrite and Draft


EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process.

Component 1.2: Produces draft(s). W

Component 1.3: Revises to improve text. W

Component 1.4: Edits text. W

Component 3.3: Knows and applies appropriate grade level writing conventions. W



EALR 3: The student writes clearly and effectively.

Component 3.1: Develops ideas and organizes writing. W

3.2.2 Analyzes and selects language appropriate for specific audiences and purposes.

9/22/09 - 9/28/09

Week Focus:

Why am I here? (contract); procedures;
Prewriting Ideas -- gathering, writing, organizing, revising for draft

Goal: Prewrite in web, list, or free-write, then re-read and number to organize your ideas before drafting.
Goal: Fluency
Goal: poetry: Where I’m From
Figurative Language

http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Where-Im-From




Mon 9/21

C: Write goal and Alphabet list of topics you know about
S: Photography -- Junior Scholastic -- How is photography reading and writing?
I: Read article/look at pictures for discussion and prewrite/draft on one of your alphabet topics

Tues 9/22
Notebook, Folder, CSI checklists
Table of Contents

Intro: Where I’m From
Sample/Ideas discussion


Wed 9/23
Notebook, Folder, CSI checklists
Table of Contents

Continue: Where I’m From -- timeline
Think in terms of snapshots

Thurs 9/24
Library
WASL review: persuasion


Fri No School Mon Teacher Training No School
Tues 9/29
Notebook, Folder, CSI checklists
Table of Contents
WASL review: persuasion
Into: Where I’m From -- timeline/snapshots/images prewriting/draft






EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process.

Component 1.2: Produces draft(s). W

Component 1.3: Revises to improve text. W

Component 1.4: Edits text. W

Component 3.3: Knows and applies appropriate grade level writing conventions. W

3.2.2 Analyzes and selects language appropriate for specific audiences and purposes.


EALR 3: The student writes clearly and effectively.
Component 3.1: Develops ideas and organizes writing. W


09/08/09 - 09/21/09

Week Focus:

Why am I here? (contract); procedures;
Prewriting Ideas -- gathering, writing, organizing, revising for draft

Goal: Prewrite in web, list, or free-write, then re-read and number to organize your ideas before drafting.
Goal: Fluency
Goal: paragraph structure

skin i’m in text by bell hooks



Links:
Start Page: Ms. Edwards
Assignments and Links
http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Team-Roles-Intro
Why are we here Google Doc
Wiki Etiquette




Wednesday 9/9
Writing Pretest


Thursday 9/10
Library: Need a book!
Read and respond:
What did I learn? (in words and graphics)
How does this relate to me?
How does this help me understand the world?
Share and discuss


Friday 9/11
Entry: 1 Favorite sport or hobby; 1 Thing good at in that sport or hobby; 1 thing to get better at in that sport or hobby

C: 5Bs of Internet use; need signature
In google docs, follow “write to a topic” procedure to make your ideas clear.
Ideas? Strategies? Organized? Strategies? Revise? Strategies? Proofread?
Add to your ideas for "Why are you here?"

I: Prompt--- Use strategies for gathering, writing, revising ideas.

Why am I here part 2: What do I (we) need to do to make it happen in a way that is positive, safe, and fun?
http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0AQsuI822sR10ZGZqYmJuc2JfMTA0ZDRubjd6Z3E&hl=en


Mon 9/14 Sub Tues 9/15 Sub Wed 9/16 Sub

Thurs 9/17 Library and Constitution Day Story

Fri 9/18
C: Finish Constitution Work
S: Intro Naviagations
I Reflection:
Review all procedures and last week's CSI √ Completed C's and Mastered S's -- Can you write to a topic-- where's your evidence?
Prewrite 1: List, web, freewrite, number?
Prewrite 2: Add details, names (nouns/adjectives), active verbs; number to organize
I: Did you follow “write to a topic” procedure?
Ideas? Strategies? Organized? Strategies? Revise? Strategies? Proofread?
What did you learn?
What do you still need to learn (your goal)?
How do you plan to meet your goal? (your steps)


Mon 9/21:

C: Write goal and Alphabet list of topics you know about
S: Photography -- Junior Scholastic -- How is photography reading and writing?
I: Read article/look at pictures for discussion and prewrite/draft on one of your alphabet topics





EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process.

Component 1.2: Produces draft(s). W

Component 1.3: Revises to improve text. W

Component 1.4: Edits text. W

Component 3.3: Knows and applies appropriate grade level writing conventions. W

3.2.2 Analyzes and selects language appropriate for specific audiences and purposes.


EALR 3: The student writes clearly and effectively.
Component 3.1: Develops ideas and organizes writing. W




Assessment

9/8 Goal: Can you write to a topic with clear and organized ideas? What strategies do you use? Where's your evidence of your strategies (process) and your writing (product)?

Products

Have you written:
5 things I like to do
5 things I don't like to do
1 Favorite sport or hobby; 1 Thing good at in that sport or hobby; 1 thing to get better at in that sport or hobby

How can we meet in the middle of our worlds?


Why am I here?
What do I (we) need to do to make it happen in a way that is positive, safe, and fun?


Process


Prewrite 1: List, web, freewrite, -- number ideas in order-- all on topic
Prewrite 2-- revise ideas: Add details, names (nouns/adjectives), active verbs; number to organize -- all on topic

I: Did you follow “write to a topic” procedure?
Ideas? Strategies? Organized? Strategies? Revise? Strategies? Proofread?

What did you learn?
What do you need to learn (goal)
What steps do you need to take to learn this? (plan)


08/31/09-09/08/09



Focus:


Week Focus:
Why am I here? (contract); procedures;
Prewriting Ideas -- gathering, writing, organizing, revising for draft


Cat and Fish by J. Grant

Links:
Welcome Back
Start Page: Ms. Edwards
Assignments and Links
http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Team-Roles-Intro
Why are we here Google Doc
Math Data Survey




Bar-b-cue 8/31

Meet the families--Introduce the year
Focus--Who am I--Who are you
What should I know about your student?
Writing Class Technology
Reading Strategies, homework supplies; Writing Components (Traits and Process), strategies, supplies

Tues 9/1

Paper: 5 things I like to do
It’s Utter Panda-monium Around Here! How do we prevent pandemonium?
Welcome Prezi and Glogster info.
(T-Chart) Procedures -Enter room--Supplies--Help
Cat and Fish
Prompt:
How can we meet in the middle of our worlds?
http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Team-Roles-Intro

Edit: Captials, Punctuation, Spelling

WED 9/2

CSI: Capture, Strengthen Interact
C: Paper: 5 things I don't like to do; meet in the middle (yesterday)
S: How do you write to a topic? How did you get your ideas? How did you write them down?
I: Poster “I hear yes’s better than no’s.”
Lead to review of procedures (lesson time, work time)
Prompt:
Why am I here? Independent, partner, group, class
Partner, Group at Google Docs: http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0AQsuI822sR10ZGZqYmJuc2JfMTA0ZDRubjd6Z3E&hl=en

Check:
Ideas? Strategy? Organized? Proofread?
Survey: http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Survey-AS

Thurs 9/3

Library: Book Fair
C: Meet in the middle, Yes's, Why here?*
Survey-AS ---http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Survey-AS

Finish Test
Poster: Cat in a fishbowl; fish outside looking in

Fri 9/4

C: Paper: What facts do you know from our survey? How do you know?

Poster: “Some days it doesn’t pay to get out of bed.”
Discuss how to share feelings; how to put problems aside and focus at school.
Preparation for President Obama’s speech and Constitution reading/writing

Monday Labor Day
Tuesday 9/8
Complete Constitution/Obama discussion
http://nespelemeagles.pbworks.com/President-Speaks-to-Kids President Obama

C: Paper: What facts do you know from our survey? How do you know?
Add to blog--- http://writemath4u.blogspot.com/

http://writemath4u.blogspot.com/2009/09/find-facts-b.html

Goal: Prewrite in web, list, or free-write, then re-read and number to organize your ideas before drafting.

S: Review Why am I Here? Doc
Write to a topic-- did you --
Prewrite 1: List, web, freewrite, number?
Prewrite 2: Add details, names (nouns/adjectives), active verbs; number to organize
Ideas? Strategies? Organized? Revise? Strategies? Proofread?





EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process.

Component 1.2: Produces draft(s). W

Component 1.3: Revises to improve text. W

Component 1.4: Edits text. W

Component 3.3: Knows and applies appropriate grade level writing conventions. W

3.2.2 Analyzes and selects language appropriate for specific audiences and purposes.


EALR 3: The student writes clearly and effectively.
Component 3.1: Develops ideas and organizes writing. W




Assessment

9/8 Goal: Can you write to a topic with clear and organized ideas? What strategies do you use? Where's your evidence of your strategies (process) and your writing (product)?

Products

Have you written:
5 things I like to do
5 things I don't like to do
1 Favorite sport or hobby; 1 Thing good at in that sport or hobby; 1 thing to get better at in that sport or hobby

How can we meet in the middle of our worlds?


Why am I here?
What do I (we) need to do to make it happen in a way that is positive, safe, and fun?


Process


Prewrite 1: List, web, freewrite, -- number ideas in order-- all on topic
Prewrite 2-- revise ideas: Add details, names (nouns/adjectives), active verbs; number to organize -- all on topic

I: Did you follow “write to a topic” procedure?
Ideas? Strategies? Organized? Strategies? Revise? Strategies? Proofread?

What did you learn?
What do you need to learn (goal)
What steps do you need to take to learn this? (plan)


May 27 - June 12

Focus
Writing Process Expectations for criteria

Review/complete 6 Trait work
Lessons: Thesis/Main ideas in text and images; documentation is prewriting

Photography - Elements -
Youth Voices: Near Our School; Our Town; iSearch drafts

Photo-Essay (reading/writing)

Note: Youth Voices - Read and draft on iSearch or YV Wiki; Reread and revise; proofread; Publish to YV; Repeat; find photos and info for essay-- use photo essay template; cite sources

Navigation: Service Record Review 1-8; Occupational Handbook Research; L9-20

Graduation: 2009 Wiki with poem/symbol/essay

Personal Flag Essay
Speech
Decorations

Resources:
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfjbbnsb_9247nvzpdj
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Thesis-Statement
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Revision-Tips-2
http://photographylessons-byerika.blogspot.com/
http://youthvoices.net/assign/photo-essays/9959
http://digital-photography-school.com/5-photo-essay-tips
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/iSearch
https://whatelse.pbworks.com/Photo-Essay-Template

http://whatelse.pbworks.com/WR8-Requirements

http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Wednesday-Writing-Reflections


Reading and Writing for Grade 8 for the next two weeks: Projects
2009 Portrait Page
Navigation Career Page, Goals, Portfolio
Photo Essay
Speech practice
Youth Voices
Personal Flag Essay
Decorations
Graduation Practice and decorations

Wed 5/27 Gary Martin cards
2009 Portrait Page
Navigation Career Page, Goals, Portfolio
Photo Essay
Youth Voices

Thurs 5/28 (Library)
2009 Portrait Page
Navigation Career Page, Goals, Portfolio
Photo Essay
Youth Voices

Fri 5/29 Mon 5/1
2009 Portrait Page
Navigation Career Page, Goals, Portfolio
Photo Essay
Speech practice
Youth Voices
Decorations
Graduation Practice and decorations

Tues 5/2 Wed 5/3 Thurs 5/4
Navigation Career Page, Goals, Portfolio
Photo Essay
Speech practice
Personal Flag Essay (prewriting; drafting; revising; edit; publish with graphics --google docs)
Youth Voices
Decorations
Graduation Practice and decorations

Fri 5/5 Homeroom all day Mon 5/8 Projects (am) and Pow Wow (pm)
Personal Flag Essay; Speech Practice; Decorations; Youth voices; Navigation

Tues 5/9 Speech Practice; Decorations; Youth voices; Navigation

Wed 5/10 Decorate; Graduation

Thurs 5/11 Picnic

Fri 5/12 Awards

Continue:

Note: Your Youth Voices assignments are based on your iSearch and Photo Essay learning: prewriting, drafting, revising, publishing.

1. Write about your photography learning and iSearch/Photo Essay on your YV Drafts page. The posts should specifically reference some of the photo elements you want to practice and the photo essay information your photos will emphasize. Some of your info may be on your iSearch page -- Copy and paste to your Youth Voices or Essay Template page. Then, copy and paste as posts on Youth Voices --about what you're learning about photo editing using the elements of design and about what you are learning about your thesis for your photo essay. Make sure you tag your posts with the keywords
"photo design"
“photo essay” Google Docs YV 1.3

2. Link to the online images of our school if your computer does not have them on the hard drive. Download the one you want. Import to and edit from iPhoto. In iPhoto export the "current" photo to the Desktop W8 student folder. Upload your picture to your YV draft page. Explain what you did, including the photo elements you used. Copy and paste the text as a post in a discussion on your Youth Voices and tag it with “Near Our School.” Include your explanation of the picture (how it relates to life in our community) and your explanation of how and why you completed the edit (include your photo elements). Upload your picture. (Note: this can be part of your work in paragraph one). Google Docs YV 2.4

3. Write an Earthday post at Youth Voices based on our reading and discussions in reading class. (This should be done.) Google Docs YV 1.2

4, 5, 6, 7, 8 are part of Google Docs YV 3.1 3.2 3.3 3.4 3.5 and 5.1 5.2 5.3 5.4 5.5 (See number 8) and 4.1 4.2 4.3 4.4 4.5 (Number 7):

4. Add photography notes to iSearch page.

5. Add research/photos for photo-essay to iSearch page (prewriting).

https://whatelse.pbworks.com/W8-Photo-Essay-Tips

Diigo/notes/research/draft/revise

6. When iSearch photos and research notes are taken and recorded on your iSearch page, begin your photo-essay planning.

https://whatelse.pbworks.com/Photo-Essay-Template

7. Read and write about other Youth Voices posts to complete Google Docs YV 4.1 4.2 4.3 4.4 4.5 This is also be part of your research.

8. Read and write other texts that are similar to your research. This will add to your information (Google Docs YV 5.1 5.2 5.3 5.4 5.5)

9. Write a quote on your YV page: what does it mean to you and why is it important to you. Copy/paste to Youth Voices. Google Docs YV 2.1 or 1.1 depending on length.


Review Info:

Lessons and Photo Essay: Photography; Thesis/Main ideas in text and images; documentation is prewriting (iSearch); Editing
Teacher conferences for progress/feedback -- track on CSI sheet --- Find photos; Draft -- use template

Workshop: Students work on own projects (MOTT/iSearch/YV and photography) with review lessons and personalized feedback

Focus, Thesis, Draw Conclusions about thesis with details

Diigo/notes/research/draft/revise
Photography Assignment -- iSearch

Navigation -- Which lessons have you completed?

Graduation -- What requirements and writing have you completed?



EALRS

EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing. Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies
1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan. b. Drafts according to audience, purpose, and time.
d. Assesses draft and/or feedback,
1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas. Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — looking for variety of sentence structure and length; second reading — checking for clarity and specific word choice; third reading — checking for layers of elaboration). f. Evaluates and justifies the choice to use feedback in revisions (e.g., “I don’t want to change this because …”).
3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.
3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure.
2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively .2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing

May 18 - May 26


Focus

Writing Process Expectations for criteria

Review/complete 6 Trait work
Lessons: Thesis/Main ideas in text and images; documentation is prewriting

Photography - Elements -
Youth Voices: Near Our School; Our Town; iSearch drafts

Photo-Essay (reading/writing)

Note: Youth Voices - Read and draft on iSearch or YV Wiki; Reread and revise; proofread; Publish to YV; Repeat; find photos and info for essay-- use photo essay template; cite sources

Navigation: Service Record Review 1-8; Occupational Handbook Research; L9-20

Graduation: 2009 Wiki with poem/symbol/essay

Personal Flag Essay
Speech
Decorations

Resources:
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfjbbnsb_9247nvzpdj
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Thesis-Statement
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Revision-Tips-2
http://photographylessons-byerika.blogspot.com/
http://youthvoices.net/assign/photo-essays/9959
http://digital-photography-school.com/5-photo-essay-tips
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/iSearch
https://whatelse.pbworks.com/Photo-Essay-Template

http://whatelse.pbworks.com/WR8-Requirements

http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Wednesday-Writing-Reflections


Daily--
Continue in Workshop:
Photo Essay (Question/Thesis-- draft -- use template), iSearch--notes, Youth Voices
Graduation: Symbol Art (Art, Essay, Poem), Symbol, Personal Flag Essay

Tuesday 5/19
Photo-Essay -- Ideas (JS, SW, READ),Questions/Thesis -- gather info
Graduation -- Motto vote, Symbol development

Wednesday 5/20
LRHS orientation

Thursday 5/21
Continue in Workshop:

Friday 5/22
Sunflower Festival

Monday 5/25 Holiday Tuesday 5/26
Photo-Essay -- Question/Thesis-- draft -- use template
Graduation -- Symbol Art (Art, Essay, Poem), Symbol, Personal Flag Essay

Continue:

Note: Your Youth Voices assignments are based on your iSearch and Photo Essay learning: prewriting, drafting, revising, publishing.

1. Write about your photography learning and iSearch/Photo Essay on your YV Drafts page. The posts should specifically reference some of the photo elements you want to practice and the photo essay information your photos will emphasize. Some of your info may be on your iSearch page -- Copy and paste to your Youth Voices or Essay Template page. Then, copy and paste as posts on Youth Voices --about what you're learning about photo editing using the elements of design and about what you are learning about your thesis for your photo essay. Make sure you tag your posts with the keywords
"photo design"
“photo essay” Google Docs YV 1.3

2. Link to the online images of our school if your computer does not have them on the hard drive. Download the one you want. Import to and edit from iPhoto. In iPhoto export the "current" photo to the Desktop W8 student folder. Upload your picture to your YV draft page. Explain what you did, including the photo elements you used. Copy and paste the text as a post in a discussion on your Youth Voices and tag it with “Near Our School.” Include your explanation of the picture (how it relates to life in our community) and your explanation of how and why you completed the edit (include your photo elements). Upload your picture. (Note: this can be part of your work in paragraph one). Google Docs YV 2.4

3. Write an Earthday post at Youth Voices based on our reading and discussions in reading class. (This should be done.) Google Docs YV 1.2

4, 5, 6, 7, 8 are part of Google Docs YV 3.1 3.2 3.3 3.4 3.5 and 5.1 5.2 5.3 5.4 5.5 (See number 8) and 4.1 4.2 4.3 4.4 4.5 (Number 7):

4. Add photography notes to iSearch page.

5. Add research/photos for photo-essay to iSearch page (prewriting).

https://whatelse.pbworks.com/W8-Photo-Essay-Tips

Diigo/notes/research/draft/revise

6. When iSearch photos and research notes are taken and recorded on your iSearch page, begin your photo-essay planning.

https://whatelse.pbworks.com/Photo-Essay-Template

7. Read and write about other Youth Voices posts to complete Google Docs YV 4.1 4.2 4.3 4.4 4.5 This is also be part of your research.

8. Read and write other texts that are similar to your research. This will add to your information (Google Docs YV 5.1 5.2 5.3 5.4 5.5)

9. Write a quote on your YV page: what does it mean to you and why is it important to you. Copy/paste to Youth Voices. Google Docs YV 2.1 or 1.1 depending on length.


Review Info:

Lessons and Photo Essay: Photography; Thesis/Main ideas in text and images; documentation is prewriting (iSearch); Editing
Teacher conferences for progress/feedback -- track on CSI sheet --- Find photos; Draft -- use template

Workshop: Students work on own projects (MOTT/iSearch/YV and photography) with review lessons and personalized feedback

Focus, Thesis, Draw Conclusions about thesis with details

Diigo/notes/research/draft/revise
Photography Assignment -- iSearch

Navigation -- Which lessons have you completed?

Graduation -- What requirements and writing have you completed?



EALRS

EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing. Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies
1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan. b. Drafts according to audience, purpose, and time.
d. Assesses draft and/or feedback,
1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas. Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — looking for variety of sentence structure and length; second reading — checking for clarity and specific word choice; third reading — checking for layers of elaboration). f. Evaluates and justifies the choice to use feedback in revisions (e.g., “I don’t want to change this because …”).
3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.
3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure.
2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively .2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing


May 12 - May 18

Focus
Writing Process Expectations for criteria
Review/complete 6 Trait work
Lessons: Thesis/Main ideas in text and images; documentation is prewriting

Capture: Set daily goals and reflect
Strength: Practice daily lesson skill
Interact: with words/peers/teacher
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/CSI-Schedule

Resources:
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfjbbnsb_9247nvzpdj
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Thesis-Statement
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Revision-Tips-2
http://photographylessons-byerika.blogspot.com/
http://youthvoices.net/assign/photo-essays/9959
http://digital-photography-school.com/5-photo-essay-tips
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/iSearch
https://whatelse.pbworks.com/Photo-Essay-Template

http://whatelse.pbworks.com/WR8-Requirements

http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Wednesday-Writing-Reflections


Writing Process Expectations for criteria
Review/complete 6 Trait work
Diigo Youth Voices MOTT Work


Daily--
Continue in Workshop:
Photo Editing, iSearch, Youth Voices
Navigation
Graduation: Symbol Art (Art, Essay, Poem), Symbol, Personal Flag Essay

Tuesday 5/12
Photo-Essay -- Ideas (JS, SW, READ),Questions/Thesis -- gather info
Graduation -- Motto vote, Symbol development

Wednesday 5/13 WASL Wednesday -- Reflections
Photo-Essay -- Question/Thesis-- draft -- use template
Graduation -- Symbol Art (Art, Essay, Poem), Symbol, Personal Flag Essay


Thursday 5/14 Owhi Lake Day

Friday 5/15
Thank you letters
Photo-Essay -- Question/Thesis-- draft -- use template
Graduation -- Symbol Art (Art, Essay, Poem), Symbol, Personal Flag Essay

Monday 5/18
Photo-Essay -- Question/Thesis-- draft -- use template
Graduation -- Symbol Art (Art, Essay, Poem), Symbol, Personal Flag Essay


Continue:

Note: Your Youth Voices assignments are based on your iSearch and Photo Essay learning: prewriting, drafting, revising, publishing.

1. Write about your photography learning and iSearch/Photo Essay on your YV Drafts page. The posts should specifically reference some of the photo elements you want to practice and the photo essay information your photos will emphasize. Some of your info may be on your iSearch page -- Copy and paste to your Youth Voices or Essay Template page. Then, copy and paste as posts on Youth Voices --about what you're learning about photo editing using the elements of design and about what you are learning about your thesis for your photo essay. Make sure you tag your posts with the keywords
"photo design"
“photo essay” Google Docs YV 1.3

2. Link to the online images of our school if your computer does not have them on the hard drive. Download the one you want. Import to and edit from iPhoto. In iPhoto export the "current" photo to the Desktop W8 student folder. Upload your picture to your YV draft page. Explain what you did, including the photo elements you used. Copy and paste the text as a post in a discussion on your Youth Voices and tag it with “Near Our School.” Include your explanation of the picture (how it relates to life in our community) and your explanation of how and why you completed the edit (include your photo elements). Upload your picture. (Note: this can be part of your work in paragraph one). Google Docs YV 2.4

3. Write an Earthday post at Youth Voices based on our reading and discussions in reading class. (This should be done.) Google Docs YV 1.2

4, 5, 6, 7, 8 are part of Google Docs YV 3.1 3.2 3.3 3.4 3.5 and 5.1 5.2 5.3 5.4 5.5 (See number 8) and 4.1 4.2 4.3 4.4 4.5 (Number 7):

4. Add photography notes to iSearch page.

5. Add research/photos for photo-essay to iSearch page (prewriting).

https://whatelse.pbworks.com/W8-Photo-Essay-Tips

Diigo/notes/research/draft/revise

6. When iSearch photos and research notes are taken and recorded on your iSearch page, begin your photo-essay planning.

https://whatelse.pbworks.com/Photo-Essay-Template

7. Read and write about other Youth Voices posts to complete Google Docs YV 4.1 4.2 4.3 4.4 4.5 This is also be part of your research.

8. Read and write other texts that are similar to your research. This will add to your information (Google Docs YV 5.1 5.2 5.3 5.4 5.5)

9. Write a quote on your YV page: what does it mean to you and why is it important to you. Copy/paste to Youth Voices. Google Docs YV 2.1 or 1.1 depending on length.


Review Info:

Lessons and Photo Essay: Photography; Thesis/Main ideas in text and images; documentation is prewriting (iSearch); Editing
Teacher conferences for progress/feedback -- track on CSI sheet --- Find photos; Draft -- use template

Workshop: Students work on own projects (MOTT/iSearch/YV and photography) with review lessons and personalized feedback

Focus, Thesis, Draw Conclusions about thesis with details

Diigo/notes/research/draft/revise
Photography Assignment -- iSearch

Navigation -- Which lessons have you completed?

Graduation -- What requirements and writing have you completed?



EALRS

EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing. Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies
1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan. b. Drafts according to audience, purpose, and time.
d. Assesses draft and/or feedback,
1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas. Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — looking for variety of sentence structure and length; second reading — checking for clarity and specific word choice; third reading — checking for layers of elaboration). f. Evaluates and justifies the choice to use feedback in revisions (e.g., “I don’t want to change this because …”).
3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.
3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure.
2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively .2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing